Trailer: Evil Awaits (Not Finished)

We have shown our trailer to the whole class, it's not yet finished; we still need to do some voice overs and film one or two more scenes for the ending.
Our teacher and some of our classmates have given us some feedback, we have taken all the comments into consideration and have been trying to improve our trailer by adding some voice overs and titles into the trailer to explain what our film is about and explaining what is going on in every scene.

Early Footage for Audience Feedback

Me and my other workmates have shown the first part of our trailer to our class and gave us some feedback in how to improve our trailer.

Presentation and Audience Feedback

This is a video showing us showing the presentation to the class, talking about the background information, what we have thought for our trailer and explain how we are going to film it; we have shown some of the techniques we will be using whilst filming our trailer. We have chosen 'The Blair Witch Project' to link with our trailer, this is really good because the film is a low budget film and some of the camera techniques that they have used links to what we are thinking of using for our trailer.

Audience Feedback From My Pitch

I have been going around asking what do they think about my short film and I have gathered a lot of comments and put them into a conclusion to improve my film. A lot of people have given me new ideas for my film, which was very helpful as it gives me more various options to improve. They gave me some useful tips on what to use for my props, how to open scene in the film and how to use the camera, like when to use close ups and long shots. It was very interesting what people thought of my film as it gave me a lot of new ideas so I could put them together to make a good short film. Almost everyone liked my short film which I was very pleased with, however, some of them thought it was too simple so they gave me more ideas on how to make the film more interesting.